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Warm engulfing embrace, caressing as if it were lace… My body though the heat does effuse, my heart still doth refuse. Burn me up to a crisp with the blaze; let my eyes with death be a glaze. Flames swallow me until my body is burnt and hollow, for I will not live to see tomorrow.
The chill I cannot tolerate, your glance once passionate now holds hate. Where is the fire? Oh that lustful desire! Now all I see is the bitter glare; please bring back the ardor in that stare! Instead of love you are ice, full of malice and vice.
The way you made me feel, my soul into the air began to reel! I miss the weightless sensation that used to bring about extreme intoxication. Like a bird taking flight, my heart thudded with all its might. You set my heart alight.
But here I am on the street, with my tear drops pattering at my feet. I look into your lit windowpane, and I feel my heart begin to wane. Oh losing you was the worst pain, but loving you was my bane. So I'm sitting in this urban scene, remembering that romantic dream.
This fiery, icy theme has kept my heart flying to your room, crying at your feet.
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For a prompt for #Unseen-Writers

I decided to use all the prompt key words...just to see what came up. Turned out pretty good I think. Fire, ice, flight, and urban were the prompt words.

And...the photo is mine...so no more crap about me "stealing" stuff. :|
Prose is mine as well.
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~Deus-Suetonius Sep 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
my dear, this is only a prose because of the format :P if you reformated it, it's easily a very wonderful AABB style poem :)
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*DeactivatedAndGone Sep 30, 2012  Professional Writer
bah! you evil thing! lol jk...c'est la vie...it's another addition to my gallery. I only write for fun...and the occasional prompt.
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~Deus-Suetonius Sep 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
But I lurves eet :C
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*DeactivatedAndGone Sep 30, 2012  Professional Writer
:iconexcitedlaplz: mission accomplished...
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~ScarletMason Sep 28, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Very well crafted and elegantly designed. Job well done.

Faithful artist and friend,

Mason
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*DeactivatedAndGone Sep 28, 2012  Professional Writer
Thank you dear heart. :heart:
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~ScarletMason Sep 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're welcome.
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